A Sad Nazm - Aye Ghalib!

Crafted a short sad Nazm on just random thoughts. 

These days have been writing a lot and getting lots of crazy thoughts which am simulating in to something which people can either relate to, or laugh at, frown at, or basically arouse any of the 8/9 emotions.

If it does arouse any emotion within you after reading, please do comment, share, subscribe or like or forward or whatever.

Thinking also, of starting a Vlog where I can perform my stuff online and put it across platforms. Let me have your thoughts.

BTW completed this after some time:

Andar hi andar ghut ghut key marne se behter

Ghoot ghoot key andar marna sahi hai

Mere Janaze par agar Unka bhi phool chadha,

Toh unka pyar abhi bhi wahi hai

Umra yu basar ho, meri duaayein unhe lag jaye,

Unke sivay zindagi, zindagi nahi hai

Fakiro ney toh rishtey sare todd diye,

Tuti Dor, aye Daur-e-saki ab tuhi hai. 

Ibadat mey unke kafir bann gaye hai

Manzar na abb Imaan hai na Ilahi hai

Mere aks mey kyu dikhti mujhe meri parchayi hai,

Age hai Khayi aur piche bass tabahi hai

Dariya par maujo si apni huqumat hai,

Kashti mey naa jane kyu tanhayi hai

Aye Ghalib, tark-e-mohabbat mey hum halaal hai,

Apne zholi mey mili Mehbooba-e-Kasai hai! 

A Short Sad Nazm - Aye Ghalib!

Crafted a short sad Nazm on just random thoughts. These days have been writing a lot and getting lots of crazy thoughts which am simulating in to something which people can either relate to, or laugh at, frown at, or basically arouse any of the 8/9 emotions.

If it does arouse any emotion within you after reading, please do comment, share, subscribe or like or forward or whatever.

Thinking also, of starting a Vlog where I can perform my stuff online and put it across platforms. Let me have your thoughts.

Aye Ghalib:

Aye Ghalib tu ne thik kaha

Andar hi andar ghut ghut key marne se behter

Ghoot ghoot key andar marna sahi hai

Mere Janaze par agar Unka bhi phool chadha,

Toh unka pyar abhi bhi wahi hai

Umra yu basar ho, meri duaayein unhe lag jaye,

Unke sivay zindagi, zindagi nahi hai

Fakiro ney toh rishtey sare todd diye,

Tuti Dor, aye Daur-e-saki ab tuhi hai. 

A New Nazm - Woh Chali Gayi!

I recently penned a Nazm and wanted to put it across for reviews. 

WTF; this Nazm is a very personal one and has come from the oblivions of my heart / brain. Hope you all like it. 

Woh Chali Gayi….

Sitar hai, pur suro ki sath chali gayi, 

Kitaab hai par Kahaani chali gayi,

Mithai hai par mithaas chali gayi,

Gunaah hai, par meri sazaa chali gayi,

Deedaar hi nahi. abb toh unki Raza bhi chali gayi!

Dhundhne apni rahein nayi nayi,

Woh hame akela chhod chali gayi

Duniya key waste toh khub muskuraye,

Shab-e-Shhok mey asoouo ki nadiya beh gayi

Teri yaad mey tarein bhi khoob chamkaye,

Chand hai par uski Chandni chali gayi

Teri manzar pey kahin dukh na ho,

Teri dagar mey kahi asoon na ho

Khushiya hi khushiya ho tere daye, Baye,

Tere bina meri zindagi puri khali gayi

7 janam, 7 Kasme, 7 phere, 7 vaadein,

They alag Sapne, mayusi mey zindagi basar gayi

Khate mey Duvaoyein kya khoye, kya Paye,

Ghadi ki sui bhi abb ghamo pey theher gayi.

Muddato baad mile toh alvida kehna,

Mere wajood ka tu hi tha nayaab gehna

Jholi bhar key bass layein hai apni Yaadein

Woh muqaddar manzoor nahi jisme teri parchayi bhi nahi!